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Young people often influenced in their behaviors and situations by others in the same age. This is called peer pressure. Do the disadvantages of this outweigh its advantages.

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Influencing plays
vital
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 role in everyone's life and most of the masses from
young
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age
 are often
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 by their same
age
 people.
Although
, it
have
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 several advantages yet it
also
have
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 some disadvantages.
This
 essay describes both sides. Teenagers learn more from those who are
in
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 similar
age
 because they
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feel
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fell
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 more confident in front
on
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 them as compared to teachers or parents.
Also
,they can share everything with each other including personal matters without any kind of shyness,
moreover
, young
students
 learn
easily
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 and faster due to
peer
pressure
 which
help
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 in their academics.
For instance
, according to the survey of 'Times of Japan' 90%
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school
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students
 perform better because they study with their
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age
 friends during the lockdown period.
This
 happens because
students
 who are shy in class,
they
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 feel free to ask anything with their friends.
However
, sometimes things
goes
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 wrong and the reason is
peer
pressure
 because sometimes
youngest
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 join
wrong
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 group as a consequence,they lost
right
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 track. Apart from
this
, In
this
 technology world, most of the
students
 spend their time with social media sites and when they influence
from
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 their influencer they quite studies in between and try to do those things which the influencer
done
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 in his life without
as
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research and they face failure and the cause is
peer
pressure
. In summary,
peer
pressure
 has both merits and demerits but, its disadvantages do not outweigh its advantages. Because its cons seen in rare cases.
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