Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Today many developed countries giving bias to train top athletes by provide them

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structure

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instead

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basic equipment and land for

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public purpose.

Although

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trend bringing to countries several benefits, I strongly believe

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tendency is a negative development On the one hand, it understandable why

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give a priority to elite athletes due to they can make good results for their country. Indeed,

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trainer

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can take many high prizes and abundant medals in international sports events, like

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, world cup or Olympics... Thereby, it can put their flags on maps, by improving national brandings, it can exert positives impact on these countries especially economics and tourism.

Therefore

,

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believe that sponsor a mass of money to building

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to providing athletes

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best condition to practice.

On the other hand

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can encounter more risk of people’s health triggered by negligence about providing social basic equipment. Providing more public facilities for dwellers is a good way to reduce the burden on health care. Specifically, when citizens are encouraged to take exercise, they can tackle the risk of different common diseases and save

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huge money spent on

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public for

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.

Secondly

, when a person has

ambition

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to be a professional athlete they required to a good condition and environment to striving for their dream and

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they will become an excellent athlete, gain main prizes for

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in the future. If

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only focused on building specialized facilities to train top

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they might ignore the

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generations. If young people

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have a carefully sponsor sports platform of

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will be posed a threat. In conclusion, while spending state budget to enhance special facilities to achieve global

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metals is necessary, it is pivotal for

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to build

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structure for residents for social long-term benefits.