In many countries, people now wear western-style dress such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this? Is it a positive or negative development?

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are forgetting the root of their traditions under the influence of

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dress. We might have noticed that in recent years

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tend to wear suits and jeans rather than their traditional clothes. I believe that

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is a negative development and

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idea. The fashion and advertising industries are the root causes of

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's tendency to

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dress. These two industries are very powerful corporations that fuel many other industries. They have a huge amount of revenue and they play an indispensable role in the individual’s preferences. Their activities come in sequence.

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the fashion industry invents a style and

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the advertising industry plays its own part to tempt

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to buy the products. These kinds of advertisements lure

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to buy goods without

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insight into what really benefits their culture. The second major reason behind

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is the development of high-tech devices which made mass production possible. Mass production

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the low-quality materials in turn results in

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low-price dresses. Many traditional clothes are handmade and they are made of high-quality fabrics which can be used for a long period.

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, they are costly which is actually reasonable.

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to the less popularity of traditional clothing

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many middle-class and low-class citizens. I believe that

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development is a negative one that can have destructive effects on society. First of all,

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the world today is more

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small well-linked global village rather than

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entities

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, it is very important that different traditions

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as food, clothing, culture

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etc. followed by the citizens of each country.

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not only results in maintaining the

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and identity of different nations but

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attracts many tourists who are willing to visit countries with different traditions. Which in turn may result in a rise in the total revenue of the country.

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wearing jeans and suits may lead to

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traditional jobs and

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stores related to traditional clothing. In conclusion, I believe that there are many reasons involving

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and it has adverse impacts on societies. Familiarizing youngsters with traditional clothes is of significant importance in reversing

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