Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's globalized world is art. Few citizens ponder that the authority is wasting

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on the

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and

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money

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can be

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someone

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else. I am partially agreeing with

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notion. I will delineate the rationales behind it in

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ensuing

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and foremost let me commence by stating the most

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preponderant

aspects associated with that, There are compelling reasons why

people

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are favouring that, Government should invest their

money

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in other things rather than

arts

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.

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, Nowadays

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are rapidly increasing, so there are many problems are arrives.

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Government

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spent

money

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to

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on

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the poor

people

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who have can't

affords

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foods

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food

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or basic

luxires

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luxuries

and those children who learn to education

then

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government

govenment

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the govenment

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can build schools or

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institution

institutions

for their students.

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,

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are died

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because

of traffic and no rules and regulation for the road. Government should spend

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to fixing traffic signals, construct proper roads, one traffic police are available on every four roads and many more.

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but not least,

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presents day

people

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eats more junk foods and

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care for their bodies.

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day by day

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diseases

are

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produced from the

chemcial

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chemical

or pollution so poor

people

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cannot

be buy

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any

medicial

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medical

treatments so authority must be consumed on hospital or free medicine for the below

middle class

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family. Another pivotal

aspects

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associated with

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this

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agruments

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arguments

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is that

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shuld

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should

invest their

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on

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in

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arts

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because from

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arts

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art

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people

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can

indentify

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identify

their nation or things. Those

people

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who have

ability

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the ability

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to do

arts

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they

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apply

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could not

be invest

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for themselves.

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government

govenment

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should help

for

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apply

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their

people

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so the nation can

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development

.

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,

People

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knows the nations from the

arts

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.

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, In India

thare

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there

are many

arts

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available and

tourist

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tourists

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come to know our culture. Bhimbetka petroglyps found in cental india.

sculputure

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sculpture

was a common practice among

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Buddhists and Hindus. In

Rajasthan

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there are many courts there to know their history.

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,

Arts

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are consistent sources of economic growth during both good and difficult economic times. In conclusion, Al in all, to amalgamates all the points discussed above, it can be

recapituated

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recapitulated

that, despite

of

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having

plathora

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plethora

of

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positive

side,

negative

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side of

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concept is hard to avoid.

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, adequate positive amendment steps are

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needed

to implement

time

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from time

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to time by

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the requirement of

situation

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. As there is

famous

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adage goes on " Change

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is

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in

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inevitable".