You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.

Dear Sir/Madam, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

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letter to make a complaint about my roommate Hardik. The reason behind

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is his behaviour and personality and some unusual activities which he did with their friends when I was there. When I accepted an offer to share a flat with him, I was told by you that there is no nuisance

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in future, but in my case, things are totally different. Hardik always has a party with their friends on weekends, and because of that I can not sleep properly

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apply

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I have an extra class at end of the every week, so it's very stressful for me to concentrate on the lecture. I have

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filed complaints two or three times against him, but every time you warn him to let things go. Now, I do not want to share the room with him, so I am appealing for a personal room for me and It is okay if I have to pay an extra fare for that. I hope you can understand my situation and follow up. Waiting for a positive reply as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, XYZ

hardikgajera609Fri May 23 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure to explain your points clearly and logically in separate paragraphs. Each paragraph should have a single idea.

task achievement

Try to use a more formal tone in your writing. Words like 'cannot' instead of 'can not', and 'I would appreciate' instead of 'I am appealing' can help.

task achievement

You clearly stated your request for a personal room and explained your reasons, which is good.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

196 words

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