Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Due to globalization, all goods are transported over the
word
, which local residents in each country can easily Correct your spelling
world
puchase
everything without any barriers. Correct your spelling
purchase
This
seems to provide positive change among countries.
Since all products
available
Add a missing verb
are available
every
part of the world, people will save travelling expenditure and time. Compared to the past, humans took a long way for buying materials or household items from other countries which have been made in there and have not been found in Change preposition
in every
thier
country. Correct your spelling
their
the
Moreover
, even though those who are busy with work, they
can get those goods effortlessly by purchasing them in the supermarket nearby the office or home. Correct pronoun usage
apply
For instance
, I and my friends are into Korean cosmetic products
and clothes, and there are a lot of shops selling them in Cambodia in the present, which we do need to request our friends to deliver those products
from Korea like before.
In addition
, the bussinesses
will be significantly improved in every country provided that the number of costumers Correct your spelling
businesses
have
been increasing noticeably. Generally, all businesses have put Change the verb form
has
affort
to attract more buyers for more income, but they are challenging with international Correct your spelling
effort
costumers
in Correct your spelling
customers
term
of delivery. Fix the agreement mistake
terms
For example
, Apple company have been accessing to
all markets Change preposition
apply
oversea
because the company's Correct your spelling
overseas
products
have been sold everywhere which have the same quality such
the products
have been sold in the United States which is the orginal
manufacturing Correct your spelling
original
contrry
.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the availability of the same Correct your spelling
contrary
products
globally certainly has a lot of benefits to both buyers and business owners.Submitted by sokuntheary94 on
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