Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Due to globalization, all goods are transported over the
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, which local residents in each country can easily
puchase
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purchase
everything without any barriers.
This
seems to provide positive change among countries. Since all
products
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part of the world, people will save travelling expenditure and time. Compared to the past, humans took a long way for buying materials or household items from other countries which have been made in there and have not been found in
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the
country.
Moreover
, even though those who are busy with work,
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can get those goods effortlessly by purchasing them in the supermarket nearby the office or home.
For instance
, I and my friends are into Korean cosmetic
products
and clothes, and there are a lot of shops selling them in Cambodia in the present, which we do need to request our friends to deliver those
products
from Korea like before.
In addition
, the
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businesses
will be significantly improved in every country provided that the number of costumers
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been increasing noticeably. Generally, all businesses have put
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effort
to attract more buyers for more income, but they are challenging with international
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of delivery.
For example
, Apple company have been accessing
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all markets
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because the company's
products
have been sold everywhere which have the same quality
such
the
products
have been sold in the United States which is the
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original
manufacturing
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contrary
. In conclusion, I strongly believe that the availability of the same
products
globally certainly has a lot of benefits to both buyers and business owners.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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