Successful sport professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justifiable while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is commonly believed that occupation and earning play key roles in life and no one can deny it.
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, in recent decades, we have witnessed that certain sport professionals have taken by far much more salaries than the majority of society. While some are of the opinion that Linking Words
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I myself disagree that they earn great amounts of money.
On the one hand, criticizers of paying much to Linking Words
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professionals tend to look more pessimistically at the issue. In fact, they claim that the salaries must be compatible with the wages most walks of society earn. Change the noun form
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, a football star not only does not provide an important service but Linking Words
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the amount of money he earns is by far much more than needed.
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by no means acceptable and they have their own idea. Actually, it is implied by them that these athletes are the most talented among their peers, meanwhile, dedicating years of practice to develop their skills there is a large number of fans and audience for them. Change the verb form
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so hard to improve his abilities and has a large number of fans worldwide who are willing to pay money to support him, Change the spelling
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believe that someone like him is only one genius.
In conclusion, in my perspective, the salaries of most professional athletes must be Change the pronoun
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sports men
and women could be paid much more.Correct your spelling
sportsmen
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