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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this statement?

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It is undeniable that the most popular
language
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 is English
that is
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 the main
language
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 in many countries, nowadays. Increasing
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the
use
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 of certain languages every year can
cause
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 the
loss
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 of some lingoes, while some
people
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 think that
this
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 movement can make them
to
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have
easy
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 life because they have fewer
words
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 to
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 in the globe. From my point of view, I agree with
this
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 idea for many reasons which will be outlined in the detail in the following paragraph. In my opinion, I think that the
loss
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 of several speeches is not good for the community, and
people
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 will not have
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 life because some lingoes are the origin of the other lingo,
such
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 as the Japanese
language
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 is developed from China
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,
as a result
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,
people
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 cannot create new
words
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, new cultures and new innovations.
In other
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words
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, if
people
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 want to create new
words
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, they will
use
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 some old
words
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 to create new vocabulary.
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, the extinction of some languages can
cause
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 many problems,
for example
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, there can
cause
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 the extinction of some experience, which are an important thing for everybody at the presents, in native of each region, like cooking food from herbs.
Moreover
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, having fewer speeches in the world can lead to negative effects on human culture.
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, the extinction of a part of their cultures, like knowledge of ecology and behaviour of native languages which are the local wisdom and the key factors to
use
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 in terms of the creation
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 information and new activities at the present time.
Furthermore
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, many linguists and many teachers may be useless when the world is becoming fewer
words
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. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with
this
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 viewpoint due to the
loss
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 of some sounds can
cause
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 the
loss
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 of some cultures which are significant for every society, resulting the humans nowadays will not have new information to construct new innovations.
Therefore
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, it is recommended that the governments in each area should support and encourage their citizens to
use
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 their own sound rather than other sounds for the conservation
these
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 voices.
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  • economic integration
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  • unique perspectives
  • translation tools
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