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Today due to advanced medicine people are living longer. Because of this older people are projected to outnumber younger people. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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In recent years, because of improvements in
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 we witness that individuals are living many years longer than before.
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, the number of older people has increased and outnumbered
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 population.
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 am concerned, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
First
 and foremost, due to advanced
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 lots of diseases that were catastrophic and killing are no more dramatic.
However
, there are still some illnesses that harm humans' immune system but most of them are controlled because of vaccinating or producing proper syrups and pills which affect immediately.
Moreover
, the advanced methods of surgeries saved many lives beyond imagination.
Second
, every country needs enough young generation who has the strength to work many hours, yet rising the number of elders triggers an alert which is dangerous. To solve
this
 issue, men in charge must encourage folks to have
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 to provide youngsters to study or to work. Plus, taking care of old age people has fortune expenses which must be paid by the governments by allocating
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 so
this
 generation leaves a heavy burden on politics' shoulders. To summarize, we see fewer deaths in communities thanks to medical developments but it has demerits like lack of work and study power and,
also
 it causes a great cost. I personally think that by providing a situation to propagate, the positive aspects outweigh the negative ones.
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