Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The best way to develop
road
safety
is to
revised
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the
age
of drivers and regulate the
road
rules
. I completely agree that the best way to improve
road
safety
is to increase the minimum legal
age
level of the
vehicle
driver
. Analyzing the seriousness of driving and
risikness
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business
for others' lives, the
age
bar should be fixed
accordingly
will prove
this
.
Firsty
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Firstly
First
, some people think that the
vehicle
driver
should be old enough to be able to hold a key and follow the
safety
measures of roads.
In addition
to that, they must cross certain
time
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of their
life
so that they can understand
the
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all the
road
infrastructure
rules
and regulations, and take proper
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at the time of the emergencies.
For example
, if the car
driver
is not mature, do not understand the priority
rules
and may not allow the emergency
vehicle
such
as fire and medical ambulance
instead
may involve in competition, will result in
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mess.
Thus
,
the
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motor
vehicle
driver
should meet their minimum legal
age
.
Secondly
, the
structured
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of
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motorway
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motor way
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is different, some of the places need more concentrations to run the means of transportation. One must understand the associated risk with the place where they are taking their motor
vehicle
.
Moreover
, to
take
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a proper decision about the severity and riskiness of
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one
have
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to reach
the
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certain level of
duration
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the duration
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of their
life
.
Small
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mistake
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can be
a
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life threatening
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decisions
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to many persons.
Thus
, the driving
age
must be revised and meet the legal requirement for the
safety
of the rider
life
.
For instance
, to understand the highway
rules
one should be able to estimate the distance between two cars and forecast the speed of others
such
as front and back
truck
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trucks
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. In conclusion,
legal
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age
of people should be determined on the basis of uncertainty
involve
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in driving and
ability
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of
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take
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decision
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based on
situation
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the situation
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.
Legal
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age
of individuals plays
vital
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a vital
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role and to get
driver's
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a driver's
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license the
age
may not be real
age
this
also
should be considered before issuing
permit
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a permit
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since it is closely related to other persons live.
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