Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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road

safety

is to

revised

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the

age

of drivers and regulate the

road

rules

. I completely agree that the best way to improve

road

safety

is to increase the minimum legal

age

level of the

vehicle

driver

. Analyzing the seriousness of driving and

risikness

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business

for others' lives, the

age

bar should be fixed

accordingly

will prove

this

.

Firsty

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Firstly

First

, some people think that the

vehicle

driver

should be old enough to be able to hold a key and follow the

safety

measures of roads.

In addition

to that, they must cross certain

time

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of their

life

so that they can understand

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all the

road

infrastructure

rules

and regulations, and take proper

decision

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at the time of the emergencies.

For example

, if the car

driver

is not mature, do not understand the priority

rules

and may not allow the emergency

vehicle

such

as fire and medical ambulance

instead

may involve in competition, will result in

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mess.

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,

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motor

vehicle

driver

should meet their minimum legal

age

.

Secondly

, the

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of

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motorway

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motor way

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is different, some of the places need more concentrations to run the means of transportation. One must understand the associated risk with the place where they are taking their motor

vehicle

.

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, to

take

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a proper decision about the severity and riskiness of

driveway

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one

have

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to reach

the

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certain level of

duration

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the duration

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of their

life

.

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mistake

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can be

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life threatening

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decisions

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to many persons.

Thus

, the driving

age

must be revised and meet the legal requirement for the

safety

of the rider

life

.

For instance

, to understand the highway

rules

one should be able to estimate the distance between two cars and forecast the speed of others

such

as front and back

truck

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. In conclusion,

legal

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age

of people should be determined on the basis of uncertainty

involve

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in driving and

ability

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of

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take

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decision

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based on

situation

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.

Legal

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age

of individuals plays

vital

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a vital

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role and to get

driver's

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a driver's

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license the

age

may not be real

age

this

also

should be considered before issuing

permit

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since it is closely related to other persons live.