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Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do what extent do you agree?

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The
Internet
 can be considered as humanity's greatest invention after the fire because it links people together through fibre optic cables connected between even two remote places. The evolution of the
internet
 lead to a large corpus of
information
 being shared and consumed all through our mobile devices.
This
 is both problematic and advantageous, the most prominent problems and solutions to them are discussed in the following paragraphs. To being with, the
Internet
 holds a lot of
information
 online, people can query different sorts of things, from the most simple requests like cooking a dish to even the most malicious activities like making a bomb.
Consequently
, there were times where the only source of credible
information
 was delivered by the
news
 channels. Now, there are a plethora of
news
 websites available online, that are unconcerned with the credibility of the
news
 but are only there to have the economic gains. The main problem here is the ability to access
such
information
 without having to worry about any constraints to hold them back. One effective solution to deal with
this
 is having robust systems in place to filter out queries that seem to be malicious in nature and go through a series of questionnaires to rule out any potential consequences. The credibility of the
information
 produced by the
news
 websites should be cross-checked with valid sources and tag them as verified
information
. for the credibility of the scientific
information
, it should be made mandatory to add references to scientific research supporting the data. In conclusion, the
internet
 is constantly evolving and so does the false
information
 which is constantly consumed and shared over the networks.
Internet
 is a place where one can be enlightened or visit the darkest parts of it. it
finally
 comes down to us to decide.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliable
  • credible
  • focused
  • immersive
  • tangibility
  • tradition
  • access
  • digital devices
  • demographics
  • older generation
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