Writing Task 1 you have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email -> give details of the purchase -> Describe the problem -> Explain why you need a replacement urgently Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with the clothes, I bought from your online site. I love to do shopping from your store and I am your regular customer. But I always visit your shop,
this
time I tried online. My experience is very bad the clothes don't look like they were online. I purchased the black dress for my college convocation because I am very busy with my work schedule. I got the order within three days and I was so happy
while
opening the parcel. I was too disappointed when I opened it, the size was looking so big.
Then
I tried it and it was large in size
whereas
I ordered a medium size.
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,
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I ordered pure cotton stuff because I am allergic to other stuff. The dress's material was looking like some kind of mixes.So, it is my humble request to change it urgently. My convocation is next week October 22. I don't have so much time left. Hope to hear back soon Yours sincerely Sim
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure each paragraph clearly addresses a single idea for better readability.
Task Achievement
Clearly outline the details of your purchase, including the date and item details, in the opening paragraph.
Coherence & Cohesion
The letter has a clear opening and closing, which provides a formal structure.
Task Achievement
The writing maintains a polite and formal tone suitable for a complaint letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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