Immigrants suffer discrimination at work. Talk about them and give your opinion on how to change this scenario.
One of the highly controversial issues today relates to inequality. Some immigration peoples get some stress to work because of discrimination. In
this
essay, I will explain the reasons and suggest my ideas how
to improve Change preposition
on how
it
.
There are several reasons why immigrants Correct pronoun usage
them
are not satisfy
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are not satisfied
about
work. It is clear that they do not get their full reliability. Change preposition
with
This
is because they are not native
Add an article
a native
speaker
. Native people concern about their communication Fix the agreement mistake
speakers
skill
. If people from others can speak Fix the agreement mistake
skills
certain
language fluently, Add an article
the certain
a certain
however
they are not able to get Add the comma(s)
,however
important
job in the company. Add an article
an important
In addition
, someone do
bullying them. Change the verb form
does
For example
, native one give them too much hard
Add an article
a hard
task
for them or they use Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
slangs
to blame them. Fix the agreement mistake
slang
Next
, persons who are immigrants might not have good friends nearby them. As the result, they could not release a lot of stress and they feel miserable to go to workplace
.
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the workplace
On the other hand
, these problems have crucial solutions. There is no doubt that native one should have kindness
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kind
feeling
. If they can not fluent communication, it is Fix the agreement mistake
feelings
normal
thing because they are originally not Add an article
a normal
same
culture to grow up. Their expression, feeling, and custom are not equal. Change the article
the same
Moreover
, the company ought to set up the systems. For example
, in Japan, all companies install call center
which Fix the agreement mistake
centers
remove
the stress or Change the verb form
removes
have
some questions for Change the verb form
has
foreigner
in many languages. As for Fix the agreement mistake
foreigners
this
, person
from overseas can do their job convenient.
To sum up, there are the reasons why immigrants concern about their work because Add an article
a person
the person
the
issues of credibility and blaming foreign people. Whereas, workers have a kind mindset and make a consultation system may deal with each Change preposition
of the
matters
.Change to a singular noun
matter
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