Immigrants suffer discrimination at work. Talk about them and give your opinion on how to change this scenario.

One of the highly controversial issues today relates to inequality. Some immigration peoples get some stress to work because of discrimination. In
this
essay, I will explain the reasons and suggest my ideas
how
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to improve
it
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. There are several reasons why immigrants
are not satisfy
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about
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work. It is clear that they do not get their full reliability.
This
is because they are not
native
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a native
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speaker
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. Native people concern about their communication
skill
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. If people from others can speak
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language fluently,
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they are not able to get
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job in the company.
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, someone
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bullying them.
For example
, native one give them too much
hard
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task
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for them or they use
slangs
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to blame them.
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, persons who are immigrants might not have good friends nearby them. As the result, they could not release a lot of stress and they feel miserable to go to
workplace
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.
On the other hand
, these problems have crucial solutions. There is no doubt that native one should have
kindness
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feeling
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. If they can not fluent communication, it is
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thing because they are originally not
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culture to grow up. Their expression, feeling, and custom are not equal.
Moreover
, the company ought to set up the systems.
For example
, in Japan, all companies install call
center
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which
remove
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the stress or
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some questions for
foreigner
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foreigners
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in many languages. As for
this
,
person
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a person
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from overseas can do their job convenient. To sum up, there are the reasons why immigrants concern about their work because
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issues of credibility and blaming foreign people. Whereas, workers have a kind mindset and make a consultation system may deal with each
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