As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that the user should cover the costs. Discuss and give your opinion.

In the light of soaring private car ownership, whether to improve the

road

infrastructures is still a foremost issue that arouses many controversies. It is believed that upgrading roadway systems should be the

government

's responsibility to

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accommodate

this

increasing demand. While

this

may true to some certain extent, I contend that individuals should

also

be accountable for sharing the expenditure with the national

government

. It is understandable that why some people advocate the idea of using national funding to enhance

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public infrastructures. The key rationale is that by advancing the traffic system through

government

budget, congestion

as well as accidents on a regular basis

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will be reduced.

However

,

such

thinking is flawed, as the cost of improving roadways for cars is prohibitively expensive and

thus

the overspending in

this

area may result

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a shortage in other domains in the long run. To give a clear example, investing a large amount on

road

systems will make the subsidy for

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and education sector be marginalized.

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, healthcare and learning services will be

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into a high-priced level which inaccessible and unsuitable for the public.

Instead

of financing

road

improvements with

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sole funding from the governments, I believe that a collective effort of every citizen to share

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financial burden is the most effective solution. The justification is that personal vehicles directly contribute to

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traffic jams and unexpected collisions. Because of

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, the owners should take

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full responsibility for mitigating those issues. To

this

end, new

road

tolls should be implemented in tandem with imposing

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higher taxes on imported cars. The revenue from these policies can be used to broaden narrow zigzagging roads, invest

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public transports and redesign damaged signages as well. In years to come, these strategies will fortify

road

systems and reduce the aforementioned problems related to traffic. In conclusion, while there are some compelling reasons that people embrace to use

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investment in roadways, I totally argue that

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equal share between authorities and citizens will bring more benefits not only for the

road

infrastructures but

also

other major fields.