Some people think that radio has become out-of-date, and there is no need to listen to the radio for entertainment and news. Do you agree or disagree?

Prior to the development of online platforms and televisions,
audio
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transmission alone was the source of entertainment and
news
. Now that several platforms have become available, it is assumed by some that the
radio
is of not much need.
On the contrary
, I believe that the possibility of withdrawal of
radio
usage is far in the future. On the one hand, with the advent of various
news
and entertainment sources, the popularity of
radio
has seen a downfall. People opt to read or watch
news
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on their mobile rather than listen to
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radio
.
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this
is an efficient way to gather information on interested and relevant articles and hear music, it
not
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always convenient to do so.
For instance
, one will not be able to read and grasp more information while multitasking but can do so while listening.
On the other hand
,
however
, there
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number of people who seek to be updated with
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while driving or working.
Radio
system
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installed in cars are a handy way to
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catchup
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with statistics
such
as
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weather
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whether
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forecast
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, traffic updates and enjoy music as well.
For example
, the FM station ‘Red FM’ is extremely famous for the live updates of traffic status
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busy roads at peak hours.
Thus
, increasing the scope of
radio
use. In conclusion, it is an undeniable fact that the use of
radio
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is not as popular as it was when it was invented, but it is
also
true that the use of
this
broadcasting technology
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on the verge of extinction.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • out-of-date
  • relevant
  • portability
  • rural and remote areas
  • internet access
  • sense of community
  • local engagement
  • traditional radio
  • disseminating
  • crucial information
  • demographics
  • primary source
  • familiarity
  • ease of use
  • revitalized
  • internet radio
  • podcasts
  • diverse content
  • engaged in
  • emergency situations
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