Some people think that radio has become out-of-date, and there is no need to listen to the radio for entertainment and news. Do you agree or disagree?
Prior to the development of online platforms and televisions,
audio
transmission alone was the source of entertainment and Add an article
the audio
news
. Now that several platforms have become available, it is assumed by some that the radio
is of not much need. On the contrary
, I believe that the possibility of withdrawal of radio
usage is far in the future.
On the one hand, with the advent of various news
and entertainment sources, the popularity of radio
has seen a downfall. People opt to read or watch news
on their mobile rather than listen to Add an article
the news
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the
radio
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is an efficient way to gather information on interested and relevant articles and hear music, it not
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For instance
, one will not be able to read and grasp more information while multitasking but can do so while listening.
On the other hand
, however
, there are
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news
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the news
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weather
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weather
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, traffic updates and enjoy music as well. Fix the agreement mistake
forecasts
For example
, the FM station ‘Red FM’ is extremely famous for the live updates of traffic status in
busy roads at peak hours. Change preposition
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Thus
, increasing the scope of radio
use.
In conclusion, it is an undeniable fact that the use of radio
is not as popular as it was when it was invented, but it is Change the article
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also
true that the use of this
broadcasting technology not
on the verge of extinction.Add a missing verb
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