IELTS Writing Practice. One of the major problems that face today’s governments is creating enough satisfactory houses for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.

One of the highly controversial issues today relates to

the

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nation

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problems. Recently, the administration tend to provide house Satisfaction for citizens to improve the population. Whereas, they are still eager to keep the earth. In

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essay, I will explain the benefit of

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action and suggest my opinion. One of the

first

problem

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of

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the spending a lot of money.

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is

because

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the government

likely

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to use

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taxation to deal with it.

In particular

, in

japan

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, when the admin would like to propose

this

policy, it

spend

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a large number of taxes. As the result, local residents might claim it. Another issue that

need

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to be considered

that

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it is over

task

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for them. As for

this

, they could not catch up

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essential matters. After that, civilians must refuse

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do striking. In my opinion, a possible solution to

this

problem would be taking less cost but effectively. It means that

,

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the governor should reconsider

about

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the direction to utilize money.

For instance

, they have to set up the pregnancy aid and change the education system which

go

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to school until university without extra expenditures. If these norms are able to acknowledge widespread, the

amount

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of persons get fascinated. After that, the population of

city

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the city

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is

increase

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.

In addition

, they do not construct more. Building or house, it can lead save our planet. On the other ward, they succeed to take instilling

fee

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instead

of

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a pension

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pension

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. To sum up,

this

statement concern

about

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the metropolises blame and too

much

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works for the

govern

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.

However

, they spend the costs rationally

that is

crucial

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a crucial

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suggestion.