In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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is one of the basic

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of human life. In many countries,

people

prefer to own a personal accommodation rather

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renting one.

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essay will discuss why

people

want their own property for living and how

this

is a positive outcome for them. For many

people

's change is difficult to handle and when someone

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a

house

,

anyday

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anyway

landlord can give him the notification to empty their residence

next

week.

This

can increase anxiety and stress for them.

For instance

,

people

like to decorate their rooms, garden, drawing rooms according to their taste and the idea of leaving

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at once can be devastating for them. On

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top of that, renting properties

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can

be expensive these days. In our country,

for example

, property

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increase

rent

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of 10% every year.

As a result

of

this

,

people

want to live in a personal peaceful place with no stress of

rent

or to leave the

house

.

In addition

to that, if a person can afford a private

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property

he should buy it.

This

is because it will be cost-effective for them. In big cities,

for example

, New York, about 40% of the

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salary

sales

budget

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in rents.

Moreover

, the price of properties is increasing exponentially every year. So,

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owning

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owing

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owning

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a home will give both relief and savings every month. In conclusion,

although

everybody cannot afford personal accommodation

but

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it

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make our life

for

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better

then

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paying

rent

every month.