These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

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broadcasted on television these days.which is having a negative effect on

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's

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.as

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are very good learners, they are

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to what they see immediately. when they are watching destruction and

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on the screen they are learning from it very rapidly which reflects in their behaviour.

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that watching

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on television has a bad impact on

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's behaviour. The environment of the house is the biggest impact of the place for learning positive

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for

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.

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if they see parents or siblings are fighting or blaming for each

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would learn from their parent's behaviours. their parent's characters are badly influenced for

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's life .home is the place

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could learn positive

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and good education background. when the parents behave positive

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in front of

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they are never adapting negative behaviours.

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programmes are the biggest learning source for

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when they telecasted bad content on

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channels definitely

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are getting things from it.

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programmes could do turn

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for good or bad behaviours.

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,nowadays

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shows and cartoons

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with

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and fighting scenes.before one week in Sri Lanka one of the

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channel shows ,one school child was beaten his colleague because that child took his lunch box in the canteen .they can nicely solve

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trouble through talking with each

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.But nowadays

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are fighting for every matter. these

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they are taking from

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shows and fighting included cartoons . In conclusion ,negative changes in

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's

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are due to the increasing amount of shows on

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reflects what they see on

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.the government and parents should need to decreased

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to the positive side .