Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

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an important role in educating our

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generations.

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issue that

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teach parental

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some argue for it , personally, I

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statement. I believe

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are for academic education along with personal development whereas learning parental responsibilities comes at later in life after

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one. The major point to consider is that to learn being a mother or a father at a young age is difficult to understand for immature minds. The argument goes that one who himself is a child cannot comprehend the responsibility of an adult. There are limitations to his or her mind and feelings to envision a parental responsibility.

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, in my view

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a skill to young adults would be a waste of time. Another point is that

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are for academic

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education

and personal development. The main responsibility of teachers is to teach subjects which would help youngsters in their

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careers and the personal characteristics making them a well-mannered successful adult.

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, to learn being a

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is something which comes naturally after becoming a

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and is refined

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throughout their child's milestones. In my view, there are many

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which should be in a good

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. Patience, love, discipline, to name just three qualities , are important to be a good

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. Adding to these three, financially stable and educated parents can provide for their child's basic needs

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as food, shelter, education and extracurricular activities. If one

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, they should not focus on educating children

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of being a mother or a father,

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the existing parents should try to be the perfect role model for their children. To conclude,

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young adults would be the

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parents

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skill is inessential. In my view, youngsters should focus on their academics and personal growth and once they are successful in their adult life

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they would have the time and the resources to be a good

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