A museum is near your home looking for people to do part time unpaid work. You would like to do some unpaid work at the museum Write a letter to the museum director to apply.

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Dear Sir, I am delighted after noticing your advertisement for part-time voluntary opportunities at the museum. Archaeology and History are my favourite subjects areas and it is pleased to see there is an opportunity nearby. I have worked as a helper in a well-known gift shop for about eight months.

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I am familiar with handling and cleaning fragile items. I assume

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would be an added qualification.

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to the above-mentioned experience, I recently completed a certification course in "Preservation of historical paintings". Since there is a separate art section in your museum it would be really helpful for me to have a hands-on experience. At the moment

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am being engaged in a full-time course at University. So, I am not in a position to contribute during weekdays.

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, I will be able to fully engage in

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during Saturdays. I can start even from the

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week. Looking forward to hearing a favourable response from you. Thank you Your's Sincerely Amila

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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