You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear …………….,

Dear Mrs Spooner, I am writing
this
letter in response to the commercial that I saw
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social media for
malyalam
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Malayalam
language lessons for your children. I do believe that I am a perfect candidate for
this
role, As I was born and brought up in Kerala, as you know
its
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a native of
malayalees
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. I have done my major in
malayalam
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language and
also
have won various awards for poetry and speeches, which was done in
malayalam
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. At the moment I am in Sydney, staying with my cousin's family and I really feel I could utilize
this
opportunity. Apart from educating your children with the language, I can
also
help in introducing them to the cultural values of our country, if you would not mind.
Moreover
, I could give a hand in babysitting too. I really want to grab
this
opportunity as I am in dire need of a job and my visa allows me to work for 20 hours a week. Apart from
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I could explore my time here in Australia too. I hope that you would consider my profile. I have attached my updated resume with
this
letter, Kindly go through it. Yours sincerely, Neethu Babu
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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  • despite

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