Some people think that with combined effort on the part of the government and society, crime can be completely eradicated, while others argue that this is completely hypothetical and that crime has always been present in societies even in ancient times. Compare these two views. Which do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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think about

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. Some

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say that if the

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and society cooperated together to prevent

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and take more kindness to others so there totally will be no

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at all.

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, others believe that it is just a wish.We cannot achieve

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's thought and I am going to explant why. There are several factors that show

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cannot be completely eradicated by the

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and social effort.

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of all, from ancient to now the nation and parents try to provide better

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and well upbringing for adults and children to prevent them become a criminal, while

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seems have not been worked yet, because nowadays the criminal still around the world and the crimes happen still every day appear.

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, in a wealthier country like America, the

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provide the best

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to every citizen,the communities and the organizations are supporting the poverty

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. Unfortunately, the

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that happens over there is one of the worst places.

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, no matter how hard the

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and community try to decrease the

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it is impossible.

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, become a criminal is a personal decision and no matter what level of

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and how wealthy they are, because there are still some factors like greediness and anger that make them cross the legal line.

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, there is a lot of business CEO, professors and even police officers,because they are greed and try to get more money or power

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cross the legal line,

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being bribes.

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, they being in the prison.

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, recent research points out that many criminals do

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affected by

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and when

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become angry they make the wrong action

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as harm other

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's life. Sadly, we cannot control a person's emotion at all, so the

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is still around. In conclusion, the combined effort from the

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and the community might help decrease the

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rate.

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, it cannot be completely eradicated by their effort.