It is often said that governments spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important? Do you agree or disagree?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Although
Linking Words
it has been argued that governments are spending a great amount of money on the protection of wildlife, examining the environmental crises only conveys quite the opposite. Personally, I believe while there are other conundrums that we are facing, preserving nature is of the utmost importance and the dedicated funds are unfortunately insufficient.
Firstly
Linking Words
, by observing the natural disasters around the world
such
Linking Words
as wildfires and floods we can realize that these are serious issues that are threatening the lives of thousands either directly by destroying cities and villages or indirectly by damaging the environment by eliminating the habitat of many species and scarring the soils we use for harvesting.
In other words
Linking Words
, since the earth is seen as a complex system, malfunctioning a part of
this
Linking Words
organization could lead to a total collapse in the whole.
Thus
Linking Words
it is a crucial key to secure enough
budget
Use synonyms
to prevent these events in order to maintain peaceful life not only for us but the
next
Linking Words
generations.
Secondly
Linking Words
, since we are facing many problems
such
Linking Words
as poverty, starvation and terrorism which are impacting human lives directly, we have become ignorant about environmental ones and
although
Linking Words
as we have mentioned previously that they are equally important, they haven't been paid attention to in the same way.
For example
Linking Words
, in 2020 us environmental protection
budget
Use synonyms
was estimated to be roughly around 9 billion dollars while in the same year, the military
budget
Use synonyms
was over 600 billion. As we can see, the former is almost negligible compared to the latter. So we can assume that not only the governments are not spending much, but rather highly insufficient. To summarize,
Although
Linking Words
the number of fundings dedicated to environmental causes is often questioned, by considering its proportion of the total
budget
Use synonyms
and observing the results on the nature, we can understand that it is not too much at all.
Submitted by armin.oveisi on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecological balance
  • safeguard
  • natural habitats
  • foster
  • cultural of conservation
  • long-term ecological sustainability
  • economic benefits
  • significant source of revenue
  • investment
  • nation’s economic wealth
  • preservation of ecosystems
  • clean water and air
  • prioritization
  • multi-faceted government budgets
  • environmental protection
  • wildlife conservation
  • neglecting
  • detrimental effects
What to do next:
Look at other essays: