Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In recent years, some people told that notice is invited them to buy things that they do not want. Others told that posters help our lives comfortable. From my perspective, I strongly agree with the
first
group of people who believe that advertising is the thing that we do not need. One of the heated issues is the ads have a lot of effects on people thought that they need something good for their life and there are many benefits to users.
In addition
, they might think that advertising is important to choose the products that they do not know how to use it.
That is
maybe true but, we should choose products that necessary for diary life and it helps us to have comfortable lives. To illustrate, from my experience, I bought a pen to lecture and it is just for writing and I do not need it for multiple functions.
Nevertheless
, some individuals might buy it for just decoration and collected. It is generally accepted that some of the posters are actually important for our lives because nowadays we consume some meat or meat supplement and it may be necessary for some customers.
In contrast
, we should buy meal supplements by ourselves because it might not good for ourselves if it is an incorrect one.
For example
, Tom needs to take supplementary food but he does not know how to take it, he should ask a doctor to use it more than buy it from advertising.
Moreover
, if we use a supplementary from the exhibit, we will disappoint if it is not a good property that we need. All in all, some individuals believe that advertisements are important for them.
On the other hand
, some customers say that unnecessary to have ads. From my point of view, having an exhibit is not important because I can choose the products that I am pleased to have stuff by myself.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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