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These days, more people are going to university than in the past. They start work later in life and with higher qualifications. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

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Nowadays, a large no of people
are
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 going to tertiary
education
 than in the past time. They selected to get
degree
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then
 they start
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the job
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job
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Although
, higher qualifications
helps
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 to get
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a well
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well paid
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job
, yet, it increases the financial burden of
person
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. There are numerous benefits of
chosing
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choosing
 higher
education
then
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 work.
First
 and foremost is, well paid and white
color
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job
, nowadays, competition is increasing day by day because of enormous population, so people prefer
Firstly
 to take adequate
education
, in order to get reputated and
well paid
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job
.
Secondly
, higher
education
also
 teaches different skills to pupils, which are necessary to pursuing
job
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a job
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 in developed technology, universities not only giving theoretical knowledge
,
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but
also
 provide practical knowledge to students. The drawbacks of starting
job
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 later are considerable. Primarily, increase financial burden, people debt loan from banks to pay fees which enhance they mental stress because
,
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 they need to pay
return
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the return
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. So they cannot concentrate on their study properly. Secondarily, sometimes organizations
unable
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 to meet youngsters employees, which plays important role in
overall
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the overall
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 development of companies by giving
giving
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valuable ideas.
Also
, responsible for huge loss to the economy, in order to get higher qualifications, students opt to study in foreign countries. To conclude, while, the pros of tertiary
education
 are more legitimate,
such
 as personal can get
comfortable
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a comfortable
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job
 with good wages;
however
, drawbacks cannot be ignored
such
 as huge loss to
economy
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the economy
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