Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Today’s

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society, a certain number of

children

have

inactivity

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an inactivity

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lifestyle where their

schools

and their

parents

have

responsibility

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the responsibility

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of

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for

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this

issue. In

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paper, I aim to elaborate my agreement in the following and present a few sides of

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fact. Nowadays, as

the

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technology is advancing, many

children

have free access to

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a verity

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verity

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variety

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of things.

In other words

, unlimited freedom

are

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is

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given to

children

to do their different tasks.

Majority

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The majority

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of

children

have free access to the Internet and they can follow a number of

website

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websites

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which may not

appropriate

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be appropriate

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for

children

.

Furthermore

, many are socialized in social media which eliminate their social skills to communicate

others

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with others

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in real life.

Besides

, when they spend too much time on social media and

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play

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paly

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play

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some video games, their physical activities will drop.

On the other hand

, some people believe

parents

and

schools

should take

this

responsibility and deal with

this

problem.

Schools

should educate

children

to find their aim and their talent, whereas

parents

can make their

children

supervise to how they can look for their best in

the

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life.

Moreover

,

schools

create a schedule for

children

’s physical activities, while

parents

are able to provide a lot of healthy activities outside for their

children

. I personally believe

community

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the community

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should care about the young generation

with

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by

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providing recreation

centers

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centres

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and youth

club

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clubs

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to encourage adolescence

for

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to

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not

being

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isolated in the world. To simplify the matter, when

children

be

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sociable, they can obtain their aim and choose

healthy

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a healthy

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lifestyle. In conclusion, according to the above-mentioned facts, unhealthy life can be ignored when

children

educate with some adviser to find the right way.