Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other.

As contemporaries are confronted with increasingly intense

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are now reflecting on the meanings of

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for them. From my perspective, omnipresent

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is a double-edged sword, on the

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hand, it can raise aggressiveness and

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to obtain higher achievements;

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, it will hinder

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from recognising the importance of collaboration, leading to disproportionately focusing on

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with others.

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disadvantage of

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has so often been overlooked, especially in some Asian countries

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China, Japan, or South Korea, that citizens there are inclined to perceive classmates or colleagues as immediate competitors rather than potential partners who will bring a reciprocal relationship.

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compelling example is seen in an appalling crime happening at Fudan University, where a student named Yao Jiaxin poisoned his roommate

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he worried that the roommate "would" occupy his undergraduate opportunity. The abhorrent crime could have been totally different if the atmosphere of society had actively promoted

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to develop the awareness of collaboration,

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of merely inculcating the idea that all others are competitors who

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intended to deprive you of your chances.

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does not suggest that

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can only bring adverse influences.

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, as mentioned in the beginning, when controlled at an appropriate level, it is able to realise

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' potential and help them make achievements.

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kind of illustration is myriad,

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of which is Elon Musk, the earliest founder of Tesla and SpaceX. Musk once said

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for establishing Tesla was that his counterparts serving for other automobile companies did not believe he would succeed, which ignited his aggressiveness and he made the determination to prove himself and defeat them. Obviously, out of proper motivations can

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help

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achieve what they have not conceived before. In summary,

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is a double-edged sword. If

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pursue objects with excessive aggressiveness, they presumably hurt both themselves and those surrounding them.

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,

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do not have to be afraid of competitive awareness, when directed in the right direction, it can

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contribute to

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' development.