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Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have healthy lifestyle. Others, however, say that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be.

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Nowadays, in developing countries, the more time
people
 believe that they have a certain difficulty to deal with a healthy life, whereas many think it would be easy to struggle with it; and
also
,
people
 would be able to set a healthy and comfortable lifestyle. I personally assume that
people
 can have fun and have a health condition, while the countries provide a wide range of opportunities for the citizens. On one hand, there are some inhabitants who believe it would be extremely hard to make their life healthy and find a
way
 to be in a good shape.
In other words
,
these
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 days’ society, many
people
 are busy and
have
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 not enough time to work out. Mostly, they prefer to find an easy
way
 to achieve their desire,
such
 as buying delivery food
instead
 of cooking homemade food or playing video games rather than going out and have fun with their ages.
On the other hand
, others say that the public can get easy access to various ways of life. To clarify the matter, developing countries offer a number of opportunities to
society
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. Usually, these
chances
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 help the population to be more active to find a
way
 to be
in
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fit
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a fit
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 and stay healthy. Recreation
centers
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, clubs, soccer fields and other physical classes motivate
people
 activities in healthy
behavior
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. In conclusion,
although
 both views make great points, I wholeheartedly hold on to the belief that
people
 should find a
way
 to be healthy and fit,
however
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 they have a limited time to create the best
way
, while plenty of opportunities are given to citizens.
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