Over time, as children grow older, the relationship they have with their parents changes. In your opinion, what role should parents have in their adult children’s lives?

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time pass, the relationship between

parents

and children has changed as kids are growing up, and adults are getting older. In

this

essay, I will deliberate the

role

of

parents

that should act for their offspring and provide my overview according to my own experience.

First

of all,

although

pupils do not need the special

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such

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, sending to school, and convincing them to sleep, when they are mature,

parents

can act as the

role

model for them.

For example

, my father worked as a civil servant, and he had never committed any

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in his record. Due to

this

, after I graduated from a university, I applied for working as a government officer because I have my father as a

role

model, and I pledge myself not to do any illegal

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at all.

Therefore

, adults have a significant influence on

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opinion of kids.

Moreover

,

parents

can be an

advisor

for their youngsters as they have experienced the things that children will face when they become mature.

For instance

,

parents

can give

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advice for

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a university and job, socializing, building

family

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and even having a girlfriend. From my experience, my mother was the best

advisor

for planing the

first

date for me, which she urged me to take her to dinner, and supported money for the date. For

this

reason,

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can act as the best

advisor

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invaluable suggestion based on a perspective of an adult. In conclusion, when the time has changed, the

role

of

parents

in taking care of their children has

also

been different associated with kids' ages.

However

,

parents

still significantly dictate

offsprings

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by acting as a

role

model

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for living and being the best

advisor

for them when they have an obstacle and constraint.