You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Some people argue that educating
children
at home
is the most benefitial
method for a child’s development while others believe that it is essential for Correct your spelling
beneficial
children
to attend school
. Although
both methods have their own benefits, i
personally agree Change the capitalization
I
to
the Change preposition
with
second
opinion more.
On the other hand
, teaching children
at home
is not so bad an option. By staying at home
to study, parents can closely spectate their children
’s studying process. Therefore
, changes to increase their efficiency are made much more easily, such
as tutors, timetables, ... etc. Furthermore
, studying at their own residential house creates a comfortable environment without distraction. Children
will feel more relaxed studying since it’s their house, food and water will always be available for them and hygiene at home
is not as big a problem as in other unfamiliar places.
On the other hand
, going to school
can have enormous benefits on children
’s future. There may be some personal inconvenience when they first
go to a strange place, but eventually
they will get used to it. The best benefit going to Add a comma
,eventually
school
bring
about is that Change the verb form
brings
children
can interact with people. By socialising and studying with other people around, children
can develop soft skills, which are amazingly useful in their life, such
as project leading, communication skills, .. etc. Moreover
, studying at school
can help children
learn more from others, improve their thinking and mature much faster.
In conclusion, studying at home
or at school
both have their indisputable advantages and none is really bad. But in order for children
to fully develop their thought process
and prepare for the future, attending Fix the agreement mistake
processes
school
is definitely much better.Submitted by hnphu79 on
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