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Many countries today are experiencing problems associated with noise pollution (excessive noise above a normal background noise.) What are the causes of this phenomenon, and what effects does it have on the people affected?

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Damage caused by noises has been a source of worry around the world and has garnered considerable public attention.
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, as well as the consequences of
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pollution
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. Perhaps the primary reason for
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 is the creation of various factories.
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 implies that these factories,
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 as chemical plants, power plants or ironworks, might continuously create an excessive amount of
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 of their manufacturing processes. Large numbers of plants are built around the cities, particularly in developing nations, and a majority of people have to suffer the cost of persistent
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. Traffic growth
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 contributes to
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pollution
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. With the use of private vehicles, citizens prefer to travel outdoor by driving their own cars, which is responsible
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 traffic congestion. And
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 car horns will be used more often when people suffer from traffic jams.
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, the trains can
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 when they go across the railways. Dwellers who live near the railroads or transport hubs endure
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hazard
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. Loud
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 may have two negative impacts on adults and children alike.
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, prolonged exposure to
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 may result in auditory impairment. Some cells in our ears will be permanently damaged and
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 cannot receive
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 sound at all. Another effect might be that humans can be disturbed more easily in noisy surroundings. According to several tests, individuals make more mistakes when working in a loud setting. To summarize,
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pollution
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 appears to be caused by manufacturing and vehicles, and it can
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 impact those with hearing impairment and disturbance.
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, reducing
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pollution
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 is a matter of utmost urgency.

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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

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  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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