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Is it good for the children to start using computers from an early age and spends long hours on them? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

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In the digital era, we observe there can be at least one computer in every home especially because of
COVID-19
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 pandemic which is mainly for their online classes. As children begin using the computers for a longer period, there may be a chance to either fall into
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 or deviate from their goals. In
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pros
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the pros
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 as well as the cons of using them. Teenagers these days are using
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laptops
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most of the
times
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 in order to listen to
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online classes, complete their assignments. During
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 process youth might diverge to the other side; they can surf
internet
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 and play games, watch any genre videos from
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youtube
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, check
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WhatsApp
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facebook
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 messages.
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, they distract from their goals or the studies provided if any of the former situations they experience. Keeping the drawback aside, there are two important benefits of customary usage of computing
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.
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, youngsters will learn some activities regarding any domain: music, dance, culinary since they spend a part of the day which is required to learn any skill to some portion.
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, they can enhance their memory power(fluid intelligence) through certain games
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 as
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 N Back game, PUBG.
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, according to research conducted by Cambridge
University
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 more than 35% of people have been remembering their past since
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their childhood provided they play Dual N Back game from that time. In conclusion, I argue that
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 there are cons which are there for every equipment when utilized more than the requirement, the pros that are to be considered whether they are more than cons or not since we can evade from the disadvantages by taking some precautions.
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