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Some people say that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Others think that those who contribute to society like scientists and teachers are more successful. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

#people #individuals #money #society #scientists #teachers
Until now, no one has clearly defined, how to measure a successful individual since it is subjected to that particular person.
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 the main aspects considered in evaluating
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 and social. While
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 believe that the wealthier people are above in the ranking, we cannot neglect the community that engage relentlessly in
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uplifting
 the socio aspect of the world in educational institutions and research
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.
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Businesses
Businessmen
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 are mostly considered as the richest among all.
Firstly
, they are capable of consuming their earnings on whatever they want to enjoy their life. They and their families or friends
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 can be happy because of their buying power.
Secondly
, those are the ones who
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 thousands of job opportunities
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 other people.
For example
, the
richests
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richest
 individuals like the owners of Google, Amazon or Facebook have generated millions of income sources
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 each and every sector of the society to increase the economical indexes of the entire population.
On the other hand
,
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academic
 professionals like teachers and scientists are the masterminds behind shaping up the human being. Mainly, teachers guide and nurture the kids during their early life
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 the knowledge and practises they have
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 so that those students can contribute to
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 in future. At the same time,
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scientists and researchers are continuously studying
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various critical issues
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 as pandemics, climate changes, starvation and etc. Those experiments have been providing solutions to the entire community
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 the period. So, these experts
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society. In my opinion, both
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 of achievers
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 necessary to balance and going forward. There could be plenty of
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occasions
, where both parties need the support of each other as well.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial prosperity
  • capitalizing
  • luxury travel
  • exclusive experiences
  • contributions to society
  • humanitarian workers
  • lasting impact
  • highly subjective
  • cultural, societal, and personal values
  • comfort and security
  • deeper personal satisfaction
  • holistic understanding
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