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In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions?

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Choosing not to
vote
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 is common in youngsters in some states. The principal problem
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 causes are
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 of
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future
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of
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themselves
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and no sustainable
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, and the viable solutions are raising awareness from early childhood and making
vote
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 compulsory. The primary issue of avoiding voting right by
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 population in few states is
lack
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 of
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future
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 for themselves.
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 occurs
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 of
government
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 not addressing the actual needs of the younger pupil because it will never know what needs to be addressed for them.
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, there won’t be any sustainable
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which
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 could be used later in their life.
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, in 2018 most developmental changes done in an Indian education board without proper consultation with students later has to be changed again due to the need and
demand
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 of a current situation. One of the main solutions to mitigate
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 problem is by educating children from
early
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 age. Doing so will help them to know the importance of
vote
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 and their right which can shape their
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.
Secondly
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, making voting
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mandatory phenomenon so that every citizen from different ranges of age must
vote
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, in a country like Australia voting was made compulsory due to the low turnout in one specific year which was
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 impacting to take a major decision for its country’s
development
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. In conclusion, the main problems arising from younger people
vote
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 negligence are lack of
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future
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 and unsustainable
development
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,
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, it can be reduced through awareness
program
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 from childhood and introducing mandatory voting
law
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laws
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • democratic process
  • political instability
  • skewed representation
  • governance
  • erosion
  • civic education
  • alienation
  • policy-making
  • accessible
  • incentives
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