In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have the opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development.

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Nowadays, government provide new opportunities for teenagers. Young people can move to foreign
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and learning in the
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. But more people disagree with
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statement and now I explain my opinions about
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, moving to other
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is a great possibility for you.You begin a new life in other
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. And migration to other
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supplies with better education. Studying abroad makes you smarter.
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your outlook on life will change.
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you find a good job and you get a good salary.
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, studying in other
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country
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you know cultures of a foreign
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, new languages, foods, holidays and meet with other people and you begin a new life.You gain new friends.And it is very comfortable to study abroad.Each
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has its own educational system.You see other techniques and new technologies made for you.Most importantly, you get used to living independently.
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, studying in another
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can
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bring some disadvantages.
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, when you go there you feel lonely in a big city. You feel like you have landed on another planet. If you don’t know the city well you will have a hard time there and you won’t know where to go. If you don’t know their language you are in a difficult situation. Another disadvantage is you live far from your parents, relatives and your motherland. You miss them. But you get accustomed very slowly. In conclusion, I think everybody can study where they want but I choose to learn abroad, because you may travel, learning new languages and cultures and recognise new places. I planning to learn in America and entering university and take away my family from America.
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