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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes drams are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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Nowadays ,
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 have a contentious augment over the popularity rise of crime novels and TV serials. Does the public have their own justification why
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 of drama leads an important role in their
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 , I would like to emphasize my personal notion about the sudden inclination of popularity among the spectators. And
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 how
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. The main motivation of
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 of fiction story is to attract the mindset of
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 and create interest among them. On top of that
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 of storyline and ends like what we imagine .
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, a suspense thriller ' 108 fiction' mostly
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 with the death of a villain or the failure of a negative character in that. The fascinating thing about
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 is always becoming a discussion topic among the youngsters and the public. Even though
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 has a negative impact on watching
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 of movie but
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 is good entertainment for its subscribers .Today we get numerous channels at a cheaper rate ,So everyone is busy with different programs in some area we can
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 see" betting system" about the climates of these serials, it is very interesting to watch these
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 are divided into groups and they will predict how
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 story going to
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 most probably
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 will
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 in a big conflict among them.
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 another side of
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 thinks that
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 will create a negative mindset among the
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 and
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 will lead to an increase in criminal activities. My opinion is that
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 is only for the entertainment purpose mostly the stories are based on true human
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 which should be extracted from a large group of
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 full stop
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 can help us to think deeply and a to solve complex problems in our
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 we have a similar problem which occurred in our
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 we don't get panic because the situation is familiar to us. the conclusion we cannot make an
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 to crime novels or TV TV programs by thinking about the negative impact of these genres. It is a matter of how they accept
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