These days internet-based courses have become a popular alternative to university-based courses. Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures. Others argue that it is important to study at university. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, it is becoming more and more common for
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students
to take
university
education
from
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online.
Howeer
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However
,
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of people prefer to
study
at
university
. Both
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of
study
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pros and cons.
This
essay will discuss both of these views before presenting the views.
Lets
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begins
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by looking at getting
education
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an education
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from
internet
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.
First
of all, online
course
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courses
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provide the opportunity to
student
study
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their course from home at
preferred
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a preferred
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time.
This
is because
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the student
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student
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students
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can watch tutorials videos on their laptop or mobile phone and connect with
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a teacher
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teacher
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teachers
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from desired locations.
For example
, Nepalese students can participate
online
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in online
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class
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classes
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of
american
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univeristy
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university
from their home country.
In addition
, another major
advantages
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of
online
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an online
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course
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courses
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is
freedom
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the freedom
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to the
studnet
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student
students
because of internet technology.
However
, no experience of
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the ambiance
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ambiance
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of
university
class is the major drawback of it. Turning to the other side of the argument. Studying
university
with physical presence have
chance
to interact people with different culture and value. The reason behind
this
is that
studnet
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students
can talk with
classmate
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classmates
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came from different parts of the world to
study
univeristy
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university
education
.
For instance
, Harvard
university
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have
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admit
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student
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a student
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from all over the world, so any
student
can get
chance
to talk with their classmate from
another countries
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.
Furthermore
,
chance
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to get close friends at
univeristy
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university
is
the
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another major
benifit
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benefit
benefits
of studying at
schools
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school
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. But
univeristy
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university
education
is more expensive
in
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compare
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with online
study
. To conclude, there are both positive and negative aspects of studying online or
university
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at university
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. In spite of
fact
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the fact
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that
save
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travel time and more freedom on
study
online, many
studnet
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students
prefer to
study
in
university
as it
provide
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more
chance
to interact with different perspectives. Personally, I
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believe
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belive
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believe
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that studying online is more beneficial for mid-career professionals and
university
education
is more suitable for younger age
student
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • flexibility
  • convenience
  • accessibility
  • self-discipline
  • motivation
  • interaction
  • networking
  • resources
  • facilities
  • extracurricular activities
  • geographical limitations
  • financial constraints
  • personal growth
  • academic learning
  • face-to-face
  • online learning
  • traditional university settings
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