Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
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people
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solve
this
problem. Firstly
,this
recent generation only focusing their targets and money .every day they are moving with companies because people
wants
to update their career and earn more for their essential goods.Change the verb form
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people
have decided their time to dealing with their own family.due to this
busy shedule
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schedule
people
can not consider their health
side.For example
,a recent study shows that the number of members in the gyms are drastically being reduced due to job stress. On the other hand
,to resolve this
problem, government
should have to organize media Add an article
the government
campains
and promoting Correct your spelling
campaigns
people
to workout
within office hours. it would be the best solution.Correct your spelling
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country
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the country
health
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company
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value
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Moreover
,themsleves
have to play a major role by motivating their staff to take breaks every two hours and asking them to workouts within their breaks . Correct your spelling
themselves
For instance
,Apple company
in USA
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the USA
company
's gym for at least 30 minutes in oder
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because
health
level they could not survive from diseases .government and company
owners have to organize health
programmes to help for gain workers healthy life style
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