It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
It would be argued by some that some boys and girls are born with natural
talents
to become musicians or sportspeople and others are not. In my opinion, however
, teaching is an appropriate method to create a composer or athlete.
On the one hand, there are a number of reasons why some think that children
need to have certain talents
for sport or music
. The first
reason is these talents
help children
to enjoy a specific subject like music
or education physical and acquire knowledge quickly. There is a chance for early achievements or becoming young geniuses because they can easily navigate their future careers. Another reason is that musical aptitudes belong to the inner soul and athletic aptitudes require physical strength, which can not be learned through knowledge. For example
, Mozart is known as a genius composer, and he wrote his first
composition before the age of 6 years old. His father then
opened music
concerts for him to perform, and he made a lot of money from being a child.
On the other hand
, I would argue that children
can be trained to become a musician or athlete. Children
in today’s society are fully taught physically and mentally, so they have the opportunity to pursue their own passion without any gifted. Children
are exposed to music
as well as physical training from a very young age. In doing so, children
will develop talents
through knowledge and practices that they have learned in the classroom. For instance
, they can be taught violin or guitar from 5 years old, and by learning for a long time, they are full of skills and abilities to become instrumentalists when they grow up.
In conclusion, although
some people who become a musician or good sports person rely on natural talent, I personally believe that the gifted are not required.Submitted by thuyhien.249 on
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