Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned while others disagree. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

#people #sports

Sports

are certainly important and beneficial to

people

although

there are some

sports

that use violence and cruelty. These include boxing, wrestling, UFC, car racing, MMA etc. Some

people

find these

sports

very violent. That's why they have become so they had spread over the world?

To begin

with, I think these

sports

are inhumane and risky. Many famous athletes have given their lives to violent

sports

Also

, in some competitions, animals are quite often mindlessly exploited,

such

as in medieval tournaments or bullfights. Spectators spend a lot of money to watch

this

cruelty.

Instead

, I think

such

spectacles should be banned. Some

sports

can still exist because they have certain advantages.

For example

, fighting is considered one of the most dangerous

sports

in the world.

People

break their legs, arms, and noses doing

this

sport.

Although

, athletes who have boxed at some point in their

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lives

life

life's

lifes

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say that

this

sport conforms brave character and affects

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apply

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a person into a real fighter. To sum up, modern

sports

often practice brutality, and that should be forbidden. I am sure that

sports

can be spectacular and without harming

people

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