You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter, explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Hello sir/ madam, I am writing on the behalf of an advertisement advertised by you in an Australian magazine that you need a babysitter for about six months for your six-year-old child.It will be of immense pleasure for me, if I get

this

opportunity as I am planning to visit Australia for an English language course and

this

job would sort my issue of finding accommodation. Let me explain my situation as I have done

this

job earlier

also

Moreover

, I am very fond of kids and I like to spend time with them so

this

employment would give me an opportunity to do what I enjoy the most .

This

is the most important reason that I would be a suitable candidate for

this

job.

Lastly

, My distant cousin is

also

staying in the same city in her free time added to my classes I would love to spend free time with my cousin.

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would be very glad if I get

this

chance. I await a favourable response from your side. Yours sincerely,

Jagjot

Correct your spelling

Jagjit

Kaur

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

175 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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The Greeting

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