You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter, explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Hello sir/ madam, I am writing on the behalf of an advertisement advertised by you in an Australian magazine that you need a babysitter for about six months for your six-year-old child.It will be of immense pleasure for me, if I get

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opportunity as I am planning to visit Australia for an English language course and

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job would sort my issue of finding accommodation. Let me explain my situation as I have done

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job earlier

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, I am very fond of kids and I like to spend time with them so

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employment would give me an opportunity to do what I enjoy the most .

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is the most important reason that I would be a suitable candidate for

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job.

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, My distant cousin is

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staying in the same city in her free time added to my classes I would love to spend free time with my cousin.

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would be very glad if I get

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chance. I await a favourable response from your side. Yours sincerely,

Jagjot

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Jagjit

Kaur

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

175 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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The Greeting

Even though governments have worked hard to bring about improvements in the healthcare system, the overall standard of physical health in developed countries is decreasing. What are the potential reasons for this, and what are some of the long-term effects?

Today, people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives? To you agree or disagree

Some people think that the government should give money to creative people, such as artists and musicians. To what extent do you agree?

Many students leave high school without learning how to manage their money. What are the reasons and solutions for this issue?

People can know about culture and life through internet. So there is no need to travel to other countries to know about cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?