Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
Shelter
is a basic need of human Add an article
The shelter
being
. Nowadays majorly two options are available for accommodation. Many individual likes Fix the agreement mistake
beings
house
, while some likes apartment
. In this
essay
I will discuss Add a comma
,essay
pros
and cons Correct article usage
the pros
about
Change preposition
of
both
choices.
Apartments
are the
vastly available in cities. It is Change the article
apply
very
convenient option for small Add an article
a very
family
or students. It is very safe and comfortable in many ways. Fix the agreement mistake
families
Generally
Add a comma
,Generally
apartments
have only one entry gate, so it is very easy to lock the house
while going outside and take care of keys. Apartment
offers many amenities to the residents like CCTV Surveillance, security guard, garden, children playing area, clean passage and stairs, gymnasium and in some cases they offer Add an article
The apartment
facility
of swimming pool. So, you do not have to spend extra money on that. So, your children can get Add an article
the facility
company
of other children of Add an article
the company
a company
apartment
to play and you do not have to worry as a security guard is available to watch them. Some Add an article
the apartment
an apartment
apartment
Fix the agreement mistake
apartments
also
appoint
cleaning staff so you do not have to spare time to clean outside are of the Change the verb form
appoints
house
.
On the other side, houses
have their own benefits like plenty of space, chance
of development and privacy. Add an article
the chance
Houses
have more space for living so, you can live with your whole family. If family member
Fix the agreement mistake
members
increase
, it a chance to build Change the verb form
increases
extra
room in vacant space available beside your Add an article
an extra
house
. A
Correct the article-noun agreement
House owners
A house owner
house
owners can develop own
garden if they have Correct pronoun usage
their own
interest
in gardening. They can Correct article usage
an interest
also
built
a garage for their cars. They can maintain their privacy as they have Change the verb form
build
be built
separate
Add an article
a separate
the separate
gate
for entry/ exit.
If we compare Fix the agreement mistake
gates
both
, Houses
are less secure than apartments
as they have more gates to enter. People belongs
to Change the verb form
belong
low income
group can not afford the expenses to maintain the big Add a hyphen
low-income
houses
.
In conclusion, Both
option
can be good and Change to a plural noun
options
both
but, place of living is totally depend
on the personal choices. As per my point of view, Change the verb form
totally depends
apartments
are blessing
for the part of society who want more facilities Correct article usage
a blessing
in
Change preposition
on
low
budget.Correct article usage
a low
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