Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

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is a basic need of human

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. Nowadays majorly two options are available for accommodation. Many individual likes

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, while some likes

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vastly available in cities. It is

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convenient option for small

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or students. It is very safe and comfortable in many ways.

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apartments

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have only one entry gate, so it is very easy to lock the

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while going outside and take care of keys.

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offers many amenities to the residents like CCTV Surveillance, security guard, garden, children playing area, clean passage and stairs, gymnasium and in some cases they offer

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of swimming pool. So, you do not have to spend extra money on that. So, your children can get

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of other children of

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to play and you do not have to worry as a security guard is available to watch them. Some

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cleaning staff so you do not have to spare time to clean outside are of the

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have their own benefits like plenty of space,

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of development and privacy.

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have more space for living so, you can live with your whole family. If family

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, it a chance to build

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room in vacant space available beside your

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owners can develop

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garden if they have

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a garage for their cars. They can maintain their privacy as they have

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for entry/ exit. If we compare

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are less secure than

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as they have more gates to enter. People

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low income

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group can not afford the expenses to maintain the big

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. In conclusion,

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option

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can be good and

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but, place of living

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on the personal choices. As per my point of view,

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are

blessing

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for the part of society who want more facilities

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low

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budget.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

privacy
outdoor activities
gardening
customization options
renovate
structural changes
investments
appreciation/depreciation
maintenance costs
utility costs
security features
gated entries
surveillance systems
shared amenities
community centers
suburban
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urban centers
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