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Online shopping is significantly increasing. What effect does this have on people, what are the demerits and what are the job opportunities?

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Since
last
 year when a lot of
people
 sit at home, online shopping has increased. So now there is a question about how it affects and will affect
people
's lives and what are the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping. Online shopping as any other business has advantages and disadvantages.
One
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On
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 the
one
 hand,
one
 of the best advantages of online
shops
,they have a variety of goods, fast comparing prices and no more crowded stores. And
secondly
, especially nowadays when we have social distance, online
shops
 are the best idea.
Also
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 it is easier as you can see all items on your mobile phone or laptop without any effort. But
on the other hand
, usual
shops
 have
one
 of the hardest times in
this
 period.
Less
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Fewer
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 customers, destroyed items and losted jobs workers are
also
 part of
economic
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the economic
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 difficulties of developing online
shops
. The bright side of
this
 is that there are increasing job opportunities.
Furthermore
, online
shops
 are
one
 of the best places to work for IT- specialists, because a growing amount of buyers need a good website to work. These sites need to develop day by day so
people
 with computer skills can always find a job.
Although
 delivery men will always be in demand, which is good for
people
 who are students or illiterate
people
 . To sum up, as mentioned online
shops
 made everybody's life easier in all aspects and all types of markets but it has shown that it is
also
one
 of the steps in the digital era of humanity.
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