University education should be free for all students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that
college
study
should have no
fees
for every
student
.
This
essay totally agrees with
this
statement because there is no value
of
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free
education
and
student
should charge
fees
as per their family
income
. The primary reason for not providing free
study
because
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there will be no value of free at the later stage. There are limited seats in each
college
every
year
as per the merits and if some
students
get
an
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admission and they drop in
middle
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the middle
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of
semester
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the semester
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considering they will get other
college
or course free of cost.
As a result
, it will impact
on
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the
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those
students
who did not get
chance
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a chance
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because of low
score
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scores
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.
For example
, in Indian, many governments institutions
such
as ITI, CPAC provide free
education
on
result
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the result
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of high school where many pupils leave
study
during the
year
and those who did not get
an
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admission due to lower marks, will have to either wait for
next
year
or move to choose
other
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another college
other colleges
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college
. Another reason for not supporting
on
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free
education
because
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is because
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every
student
should be charged
fees
as per their parent's
income
slab. Every
student
has
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the rights
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rights
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right
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to
study
and
fulfill
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their dreams in desired fields. Some rich people can afford higher
fees
where they can put their children in any colleges and some middles class people have limited options for higher
study
.
Therefore
, in order to give an equal opportunity, admissions should be given on merits and
income
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.
For example
,
One
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of the colleges in Ahmedabad, called 'Amruta arts and commerce
college
', gives
an
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admission on the basis of cut-off and
fees
gets charged as per
their
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ITR file they file every
year
. In conclusion,
students
will consider free
education
very liberal and to provide
same
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opportunity, they should be taken money as per their family
income
.
Therefore
, I believe
students
should not
provided
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free
education
after
their
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high school.
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