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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social and practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#country #language
In recent years, living in a city where you have to communicate in
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other languages can be a
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 social and applied problem
such
 as, go
study
 in a foreign country have to speak the same lingo as the
people
 in that city. From my point of view, I strongly believe that some individuals who
study
 abroad can speak the other lingo. One of the heated issues is some
travelers
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 may think that living in a foreign land is complicated and hard to understand external words because they might think that it is hard to
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 in their diary life.
That is
 maybe true but, if they try to speak
also
 do a lot of
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 they will understand outlandish as well. To illustrate, Tina go to
study
 in the United State for 5 months and she
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people
finally
, she can speak English.
Moreover
, individuals who live
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outlandish will get how to use phrases and idioms because they can absorbed
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 from
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. It is generally excepted that some students might think that spending their life in
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 country is will serious and stressful because sometimes students do not know how to speak with the oversea
people
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, pupils should make a good situation with
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oversea
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people
 because it helps them to have
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sociable.
For example
, Boo was
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 their group of international friends and there was no
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 in his group.
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, pupils will have a
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 friends if they can make a good situation. In conclusion, some individuals agree with spending their time
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external will help them to improve their outlandish words. From my perspective, I agree with that because there are many positive ways to
study
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the
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other languages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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