Science is advanced so fast that it can now make it possible for people to live 100 years or even 200 years. Some people think it is beneficial, while others think it will cause problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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believe that it is benevolent for mankind, however
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also
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span of individuals who are involved in wrong work such
as criminals, kidnappers, thieves and many other negative thinkers as well. Furthermore
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period of time.
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