More and more couples are deciding to be "child-free", to have no children, in other words. Some people claim that those couples reach this conclusion through entirely selfish reasons. While others think that they came to this decision through noble motives, such as concern about overpopulation and desire for independence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The decision to have no
children
is a matter of great concern for
couples
nowadays. While some people oppose
this
idea due to selfish reasons, I strongly support its benefits. The merits, demerits of having no
children
and my perspective will be discussed as follows. On the one hand, the kids-free option of many
couples
is approved for several reasons.
Firstly
,
this
choice contributes to limiting overpopulation explosion worldwide. Definitely, deciding on no
new-born
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children
leads to the reduction of the
amount
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of infants,
thus
it slows down global population growth.
Secondly
, those are the accurate decisions if
couples
have insufficient ability regardings both finances and physical health
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Kids need to be invested substantial money and time
on
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education, entertainment or health,
hence
, adults who have limited finance, unable to get the best conditions to raise
children
. For
this
reason,
children
may be disadvantaged in the future because of these careless preparations.
On the other hand
, the preference’s drawbacks make it difficult for
couples
to decide to have no
children
. Population
aging
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is obviously the main impediment of
this
option. In the
next
decades, it reduces the number of young people which contribute to the shortage of the labour force.
Consequently
, their government is hardly able to solve those problems.
In addition
, no time to give birth and raise a child enables no kids
couples
to have much time for themself and particularly their work. It seems to be considered
couples
’ personal selfishness.
For instance
, in recent years, because of focusing on the working of Japanese
couples
rather than taking care of a child, their government has faced a severe deficiency of workers in many factories. Those drawbacks support me to believe that
couples
' choice about
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children
is mature thoughtless. In conclusion, the above-mentioned drawbacks seem to me that
couples
should have at least one child.
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