Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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more
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interested
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specifically
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physically
socially
harmful activities.There are many danzer
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sky diving and skiing
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be banned.I
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life
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banned sky diving and skiing due to younger people are most interested to take
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they cannot be afraid to
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life
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physically
disable.
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,
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younger
youngest
people went to camping and they
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to show friends how to be sky diving and
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just try it that time they take risk in our
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.They cannot do something in our
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generation
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not
concentate
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concentrate
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sport activities effects on
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study
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in many ways.
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less time spend on
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do some other
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dangerous
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activities
.if these sport
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banned its
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to improve their
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.Government should have to do some other
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introduces because they help to develop
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in other
games
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sports
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spots
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such
as cricket and football.tennis,
bedminton
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badminton
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helps to take interest in these
games
In conclusion,government
shold
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should
take steps to banned some
sports
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harmful
games
it really
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to improve
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their our.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adrenaline rush
  • risk threshold
  • thrill-seeking
  • safety protocols
  • hazard assessment
  • adventure tourism
  • regulatory framework
  • personal autonomy
  • informed consent
  • risk mitigation strategies
  • thrill-seeking behavior
  • protective gear
  • extreme athleticism
  • freedom of choice
  • accident prevalence
  • emergency response
  • courage and resilience
  • endorphin release
  • legal implications
  • peer pressure effects
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