Some parents think giving children a small amout of money on weekly basis is good, while others think it is bad. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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their wards sem to be a helpful method to make them grow as more competent individuals, according to some
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. While
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practice is being beneficial to a certain extent, I
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believe it has its own drawbacks.
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with,
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on a weekly
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to their
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could help them become adept at financial management in future.
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will be true
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and teach their
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the value of
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and what they can buy with that
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.
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that, they will
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face situations where they have to save
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for how long to get something they need.
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,
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are always willing to pay for all of the
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's school expenses
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but do not buy candy or toys for them.
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by saving pocket
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they can buy what they want.
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, allowances could teach kids the wrong habits. Once a child is used to receiving weekly
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from their
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and does not need to pay for anything, especially in adolescence, your child will be drawn into antisocial activities
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as smoking and drinking.
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,
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must be careful in giving
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to their
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, because if they just make a mistake, they will have a lot of problems in life. In conclusion, it will always be a dilemma for
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to give their
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pocket
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. It should have advantageous and drawbacks so
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must be very careful not to regret.

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