In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?
Nowadays,space in the cityside has become a challenge and new facilities required for the development has to be built in the
countryside
.Some populace thinks that it is depleting,whereas ,in my opinion,building homes in the countryside
can be considered as new developments rather than as harm.
To commence with,developing required amenities in the countryside
is the optimal solution to solve the issue of land
availability in the city as it can give rise to development in remote areas.For instance
,building hospitals in rural areas can be beneficial for the locals.Few developers consider converting lakes to development lands in order to get some land
area,but it is indeed not the best solution for this
issue.Albie the land
is obtained it leads to flooding of the buildings
during rainy seasons.
In addition
to that,doing so does reduce the congestion in the cities.In India, for ,instance the cities like Mumbai ,It is obvious that due to lack of land
the spaces between the buildings
or flats are reduced hence
leading to a suffocating architecture.These kinds of buildings
are not safe as the safety norms are being ignored.On the contrary
, if the land
size is larger then
the construction can be of better quality and rather than a congested construction, countryside
construction is considered a safe way.
To conclude, developing the countrysides with new buildings
and flats is the best solution to solve the space issue because it will convert the developing area into a city and people in the countryside
can enjoy all the services like in cities.Submitted by suba2705.sk on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite